Post by thrif on Sept 18, 2008 2:28:35 GMT -5
Someone once said that you knew it was cold when you saw a lawyer with his hands in his own pockets. It was colder than that out in the cold, salty depths of the ocean. The dark blue waters looked almost black, tinged with reds reflecting off of the surface as a head burst from the water, coughing up phlegm and taking in greedy gulps of air. The golden glow reflected off of her dripping face and the water around her, and she turned to see the boat that had been her home for five weeks in flames, slowly sinking beneath the waves.
She floated with her head just above the water, trying to comprehend what had just taken place, and piece the pictures together. She recalled the smell of gas and a yellow life buoy inflating, feeling a strong arm around her waist before she jumped off of the side, feeling the force of the explosion before she hit the water.
She watched as bits of wood drifted around her – remnants of an old shelf that held most of their books, and maps, her sketches, and her brothers skate board… Her brother!
Where was her brother?!
“Archie?” She cried out, a knot tightened in her stomach as she floated above the waves. “Archie! Answer me!”
Her breathing became sharp and quick as she squinting against the stinging in her eyes, spying the outline of something floating towards her and felt an instant of fear flash down her spine. As it got closer to the flames, she then noticed the yellow tinge to the side and something hanging from the side of it. She felt her heart leap with relief as she realised what it was. The buoy!
She started to swim towards it, till she was close enough to grab the side of the flimsy raft and pulled herself on board. She lay flat on her back; still taking in sharp breaths as she squeezed her eyes shut and rubbed them, finally trying to get rid of the stinging sensation. She then heard a groan and looked back to see her brother hugging the side of the raft, his legs dangling off of the side.
“Archie!” she gasped, scrambling over to help pull him up the rest of the way.
“Clementine! What happened? Where’s Steve?”
“I donno!” She replied desperately.
Archie groaned, and closed his eyes shut tightly, gripped his left thigh and leaning his head back against the side of the raft. Clementine looked down at his legs, and under the light of the fire which was drifting further and further away with each wave that took them she could see dark blood dripping down into the raft and down his knee. Looking closer, she could see something metallic glint in the light, and realised that it was a piece of shrapnel - obviously from the boat - that had been imbedded into his leg. It was large, maybe twenty or thirty centimetres long, and she wasn’t even sure how deep it was.
“What happened?” She said, leaning towards him and touched his leg tentatively. He let out a loud yelp and shoved her hand away.
“Don’ touch it!”
“But it has to come out!”
“Just…wait.” He took a deep breath in and out, beads of water dripping off of his short dreadlocks into the water, causing ripples to form on the surface. The raft was moving with the tide, moving the buoy around, and bumping against the waves.
He never has liked the water. She thought. She had questioned him before they left on his reasons for coming with her out here in the first place. He knew he wasn’t the best swimmer either and had complained about 90% of the time that they had been on that darn boat.
She gave him a small ‘hmph!’ before she got up onto her knees leaning over the edge of the boat, looking out towards the sinking boat. “Steve!” she cried out. “Steven?”
Silence. She couldn’t hear anything but the waves against the boat and Archie’s breathing.
“Steve!” she tried again.
“Clementine.”
“Steve!”
“Clementine! He’s not there.”
“Yes he is! He’s got to be. Steve!”
“Clementine, he’s not going to answer you.” Archie felt a pang of sorrow as he spoke. He wasn’t used to hearing his sister so panicked. And even though he was the older sibling, he had grown used to having her be the smart one, the controlled one, the tough, gutsy one. She had always been the sort of person who could always handle any situation she faced. And her being scared frightened him more than anything.
“Yes he will!”
Before Arxhue could reply there was suddenly another hard bump against the side of the raft, causing Clementine to fall to backwards into a sitting position. Archie looked over the edge, just before they felt another hard bump that knocked the both of them back again.
“Don’t move!” Archie put a hand up at Clementine, just as she tried to look over the edge, herself.
“What is it?” she asked, her voice rose into a panic again.
Archie looked out, spotting a large dark figure out in the water. “It’s only a shark.” He replied.
“‘It’s only a shark’?! Is that meant to make me feel better?” She looked at him incredulously before looking down at the piece of shrapnel sticking out of her brothers’ leg. “Well I guess I know why it’s hanging around. Your leg.” It was almost an accusation.
Archie rolled his eyes “Oh! Well I’ll just stop bleeding then!”
Clementine sighed, and turned her face away before closing her eyes. She closed them tighter as she felt a pang of concern for Steve. He had invited them onto the boat, for a six month trip around the Pacific Ocean. He had seen hers and Archie’s interest in sailing and had offered to take them with him. Then they lost course, and then this happened. How did it happen?
She was just about to doze off when she heard a tearing sound. Her eyes snapping open, half expecting the buoy was about to tear in half. Instead she could see her brother, tearing his pants leg and putting tentative hand on the shrapnel.
“Are you crazy? You’re going to take that out with your bare hands?”
“You got a better idea?”
“You won’t be able to do it on your own.”
Archie ignored her, taking in a few quick breaths before taking in a deep breath and started to pull at the shrapnel. He screamed, causing Clementine to gag and turn her face away, but continued to pull until the piece of metal was finally free. Then, lifting his bloody hand in front of his face, he scowled at the object that had imbedded itself into his leg and threw it overboard with a look of pained disgust on his face. He gripped at his thigh with both hands before turning to his sister.
“You got a bandaid?” He said in a husky voice before he slumped onto his side. Clementine simply sighed, pulling her legs to her chest as she looked out into the dark water.
It was a long time before either of them spoke again, and the boat and fire had long been lost from sight. She felt the buoy rocking against the waves, as she tried to concentrate on the stars, particularly at the hazy band of white light arching across the sky. She loved the milky way. It always seemed so much brighter when she was at sea – so peaceful. If it weren’t for the moon light, Clementine would not have been able to see a thing.
“Hey, Clementine.”
She grunted. She had been dozing, not really asleep, but not awake either and it had only been when she heard her brother’s voice that he was bought back to awareness. “Yeah?”
“What if we don’t find land?”
“We’ll find land. All tides lead to land eventually.”
“Key word: eventually. What if we don’t find land soon?”
Here he goes again. Mister Cocky Arrogance has morphed into Self Doubt again. She sighed. “We wont.” She said simply, in no mood to deal with his drama.
“Well you know I have a point though. We could be floating around for days or weeks or…”
“Archie, I swear if you do not shut up I’m gonna...!”
“What are you gonna do? Splash me?”
Clementine growled and splashed him. “I’ll push you over board!”
Archie growled but before he could say anything, the buoy jumped abruptly and both siblings grabbed onto the sides to keep it – and themselves – from tipping over.
“That toothy son of a…!” Archie looked over board again, but was unable to see anything this time
“Shh!” Clementine put a hand to his mouth, causing him to yank away. He was about to growl again before he noticed her expression of complete and utter fear, silhouetted behind a very bright white light. Bright light?
He turned his neck in an instant, facing his right side now as he too watched a bright white light, in the shape of a ball, skimming across the water towards them.
She floated with her head just above the water, trying to comprehend what had just taken place, and piece the pictures together. She recalled the smell of gas and a yellow life buoy inflating, feeling a strong arm around her waist before she jumped off of the side, feeling the force of the explosion before she hit the water.
She watched as bits of wood drifted around her – remnants of an old shelf that held most of their books, and maps, her sketches, and her brothers skate board… Her brother!
Where was her brother?!
“Archie?” She cried out, a knot tightened in her stomach as she floated above the waves. “Archie! Answer me!”
Her breathing became sharp and quick as she squinting against the stinging in her eyes, spying the outline of something floating towards her and felt an instant of fear flash down her spine. As it got closer to the flames, she then noticed the yellow tinge to the side and something hanging from the side of it. She felt her heart leap with relief as she realised what it was. The buoy!
She started to swim towards it, till she was close enough to grab the side of the flimsy raft and pulled herself on board. She lay flat on her back; still taking in sharp breaths as she squeezed her eyes shut and rubbed them, finally trying to get rid of the stinging sensation. She then heard a groan and looked back to see her brother hugging the side of the raft, his legs dangling off of the side.
“Archie!” she gasped, scrambling over to help pull him up the rest of the way.
“Clementine! What happened? Where’s Steve?”
“I donno!” She replied desperately.
Archie groaned, and closed his eyes shut tightly, gripped his left thigh and leaning his head back against the side of the raft. Clementine looked down at his legs, and under the light of the fire which was drifting further and further away with each wave that took them she could see dark blood dripping down into the raft and down his knee. Looking closer, she could see something metallic glint in the light, and realised that it was a piece of shrapnel - obviously from the boat - that had been imbedded into his leg. It was large, maybe twenty or thirty centimetres long, and she wasn’t even sure how deep it was.
“What happened?” She said, leaning towards him and touched his leg tentatively. He let out a loud yelp and shoved her hand away.
“Don’ touch it!”
“But it has to come out!”
“Just…wait.” He took a deep breath in and out, beads of water dripping off of his short dreadlocks into the water, causing ripples to form on the surface. The raft was moving with the tide, moving the buoy around, and bumping against the waves.
He never has liked the water. She thought. She had questioned him before they left on his reasons for coming with her out here in the first place. He knew he wasn’t the best swimmer either and had complained about 90% of the time that they had been on that darn boat.
She gave him a small ‘hmph!’ before she got up onto her knees leaning over the edge of the boat, looking out towards the sinking boat. “Steve!” she cried out. “Steven?”
Silence. She couldn’t hear anything but the waves against the boat and Archie’s breathing.
“Steve!” she tried again.
“Clementine.”
“Steve!”
“Clementine! He’s not there.”
“Yes he is! He’s got to be. Steve!”
“Clementine, he’s not going to answer you.” Archie felt a pang of sorrow as he spoke. He wasn’t used to hearing his sister so panicked. And even though he was the older sibling, he had grown used to having her be the smart one, the controlled one, the tough, gutsy one. She had always been the sort of person who could always handle any situation she faced. And her being scared frightened him more than anything.
“Yes he will!”
Before Arxhue could reply there was suddenly another hard bump against the side of the raft, causing Clementine to fall to backwards into a sitting position. Archie looked over the edge, just before they felt another hard bump that knocked the both of them back again.
“Don’t move!” Archie put a hand up at Clementine, just as she tried to look over the edge, herself.
“What is it?” she asked, her voice rose into a panic again.
Archie looked out, spotting a large dark figure out in the water. “It’s only a shark.” He replied.
“‘It’s only a shark’?! Is that meant to make me feel better?” She looked at him incredulously before looking down at the piece of shrapnel sticking out of her brothers’ leg. “Well I guess I know why it’s hanging around. Your leg.” It was almost an accusation.
Archie rolled his eyes “Oh! Well I’ll just stop bleeding then!”
Clementine sighed, and turned her face away before closing her eyes. She closed them tighter as she felt a pang of concern for Steve. He had invited them onto the boat, for a six month trip around the Pacific Ocean. He had seen hers and Archie’s interest in sailing and had offered to take them with him. Then they lost course, and then this happened. How did it happen?
She was just about to doze off when she heard a tearing sound. Her eyes snapping open, half expecting the buoy was about to tear in half. Instead she could see her brother, tearing his pants leg and putting tentative hand on the shrapnel.
“Are you crazy? You’re going to take that out with your bare hands?”
“You got a better idea?”
“You won’t be able to do it on your own.”
Archie ignored her, taking in a few quick breaths before taking in a deep breath and started to pull at the shrapnel. He screamed, causing Clementine to gag and turn her face away, but continued to pull until the piece of metal was finally free. Then, lifting his bloody hand in front of his face, he scowled at the object that had imbedded itself into his leg and threw it overboard with a look of pained disgust on his face. He gripped at his thigh with both hands before turning to his sister.
“You got a bandaid?” He said in a husky voice before he slumped onto his side. Clementine simply sighed, pulling her legs to her chest as she looked out into the dark water.
It was a long time before either of them spoke again, and the boat and fire had long been lost from sight. She felt the buoy rocking against the waves, as she tried to concentrate on the stars, particularly at the hazy band of white light arching across the sky. She loved the milky way. It always seemed so much brighter when she was at sea – so peaceful. If it weren’t for the moon light, Clementine would not have been able to see a thing.
“Hey, Clementine.”
She grunted. She had been dozing, not really asleep, but not awake either and it had only been when she heard her brother’s voice that he was bought back to awareness. “Yeah?”
“What if we don’t find land?”
“We’ll find land. All tides lead to land eventually.”
“Key word: eventually. What if we don’t find land soon?”
Here he goes again. Mister Cocky Arrogance has morphed into Self Doubt again. She sighed. “We wont.” She said simply, in no mood to deal with his drama.
“Well you know I have a point though. We could be floating around for days or weeks or…”
“Archie, I swear if you do not shut up I’m gonna...!”
“What are you gonna do? Splash me?”
Clementine growled and splashed him. “I’ll push you over board!”
Archie growled but before he could say anything, the buoy jumped abruptly and both siblings grabbed onto the sides to keep it – and themselves – from tipping over.
“That toothy son of a…!” Archie looked over board again, but was unable to see anything this time
“Shh!” Clementine put a hand to his mouth, causing him to yank away. He was about to growl again before he noticed her expression of complete and utter fear, silhouetted behind a very bright white light. Bright light?
He turned his neck in an instant, facing his right side now as he too watched a bright white light, in the shape of a ball, skimming across the water towards them.